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Sentence corrections practice with answers and explanations for GRE, GMAT and SAT. ( Part -3)

1.     Advances in networking technology and home computers have made it easy for millions of Americans to work in their homes, often facilitating the communication between the manager, who continues to work on-site at the office, with his distant employees.
A.    communication between the manager, who continues to work on-site at the office, with his distant employees.
B.     communication between the manager, who continues the work on-site at the office, with his distant employees.
C.     communication between the manager, who continues to work on-site at the office,to his distant employees.
D.    communication between the manager, who continues to work on-site at the office, and his distant employees.
E.     communication between the manager, who continues to work on-site at the office, with his distance employees.
The best answer is D. The communication has to be between the manager and his employee.




2.     There are any number of skilled freelancers who can develop strategy and create marketing materials with a keen eye to using proven methods, but also to developing new and innovative techniques.
A. with a keen eye to using proven methods, but also to developing new and innovative techniques.
B. with a keen eye for using proven methods, and also to developing new and innovative techniques.
C. with a keen eye not only to using proven methods, but also to developing new and innovative techniques.
D. with a keen eye to using proven methods, but to developing now and innovative techniques.
E. with a keen eye not only to using proven methods, and also to developing now and innovative techniques.
The best answer is C. Choice C correctly develops the parallel not only… but also….


3.     

The expedition did not enter the water-filled clearing because it believed that to do it endangers the rare Spanish moss hanging from the trees.
A. to do it endangers
B. doing it endangers
C. to do this would endanger
D. doing so would endanger
E. to do it would endanger
The best answer is D. Choice D appropriately used the adverb so to refer back to the verb accord.


4.     


While royal governor of New Jersey, William Franklin’s conviction that the colonies should remain part of England was not unlike that of his father Benjamin Franklin, who initially preferred a continued association with England, though he eventually played a role in forging America's independence, helping craft the Declaration of Independence after a change of heart
A. not unlike that of his father Benjamin Franklin, who initially preferred
B. not unlike his father Benjamin Franklin, who initially preferred
C. like his father Benjamin Franklin, and his initial preference
D. like that of his father Benjamin Franklin, for preferring
E. as that of his father Benjamin Franklin, who initially preferred
The best answer is A. Choices B and C present faulty comparisons, comparing William’s conviction with Benjamin Franklin himself. Choice D does not make clear whether is was the father or the son who helped craft the Declaration of Independence. Choice E incorrectly uses as to compare two noun phrases.



5.     

After adopting broadband internet access, wireless personal digital assistants, and super-fast home PCs, Weston Insurance has hired new employees, which doubles to 250 the junior staff in the claims department working from home.
A. which doubles to 250 the junior staff in the claims department
B. doubling to 250 the number of junior staff members in the claims department
C. which doubles to 250 the junior staff of the claims department
D. doubling to 250 the number of junior staff members of the claims department
E. which doubles to 250 the junior staff in the claims department that
The best answer is B. The pronoun which should be used to refer to a previously
mentioned noun, not to the idea expressed in an entire clause. In A, C, and E there is

no specific noun.

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